Your application letter is amazing! It is great that you elaborate every single roles that are related to outdoor activities in a clear and concise way.Moreover, it is good idea that you highlight and emphasize on 'why you choose OBS and what you can contribute to OBS' in the 4th paragraph.
Given your experience and passion for outdoor activities, I think they will be attracted to employ you.
I wish you all the best for your application and good luck! :)
Seriously, if I were the recruiter, I will be calling you up for an interview...
ReplyDeleteHi Li Koon,
ReplyDeleteYour application letter is amazing! It is great that you elaborate every single roles that are related to outdoor activities in a clear and concise way.Moreover, it is good idea that you highlight and emphasize on 'why you choose OBS and what you can contribute to OBS' in the 4th paragraph.
Given your experience and passion for outdoor activities, I think they will be attracted to employ you.
I wish you all the best for your application and good luck! :)